To
discuss Facebook’s privacy issue, my annotation 3 will develop into two parts. First,
I will talk about the inefficient privacy settings, and then analyze how
Facebook makes profit from its users, which leads to the conclusion between
technology and ethic.
Nowadays
when we need to contact with someone, Facebook is one of the options for most
of the people. As one of the biggest OSNs (Online Social Network),
Facebook has tied individuals and placed them on to a communicating platform.
However, we should also notice the waking conscious of individualism, suggesting
that people gradually recognize their privacy. That is to say, we have the
right to make life more convenience with Facebook, but we also have the
conscious to look after our privacy. To support with this idea, let’s take a
look at Facebook’s privacy policy, which is smart enough to follow the world
trend. From time to time, Facebook has changed and enlarge its privacy policy
up to 5000 words. But the problem is that no one will spend time carefully
examining every steps of their privacy settings. Some users complain: “the new
policy is bewildering and the new opt-out settings is too time-consuming to
figure out and use”(Bilton, 2010).
Research
also finds out that up to 36% of information share with default privacy
settings, and only 37% matches to users expectation (Liu, Krishnamurthy, Gummadi & Mislove, 2010.) Although
some are aware of their privacy, they are not allow to have enough ways to manage
and even protect.
To analyze
why such a great company can’t figure out efficient ways to protect privacy,
let’s look back to the source of this profitable business river. It’s obvious
that Facebook is not a charity, and they need to gain money from its users. So
how do Facebook profit? According to the article (Johnson 2009), Facebook not
only provides precise advertisements to users, but also creates virtual gifts
or properties to catch people’s attention. Although Facebook claim that they
only offer anonymous personal data to advertising company, one can never certain
what would be the next trade between Facebook and advertisements.
Also, we
put information on the Internet to share with friends. But do we really want
these trivial dates be collected? In the research paper of professor Qi, “we
might offer personal information voluntarily to several separated data base.
For example, we leave scores in schools and medical records in hospital. But it
doesn’t mean we allow others to collect them and further reveal our
undiscovered side.” So is it right for Facebook to memorize our behaviors and
collect every click we made? The answer might be wrong.
Just like
what professor Qi mentions: “Privacy is
not a new issue. However, due to the growth of information technology, it
appears with different kinds of formation in all levels, which is more severe
and urgent to focus on.” Facebook unpacks a gift for people: a new platform for
social. But in another aspect it could be poison with a sugar coat, making most
of the people vulnerable when they choose to embrace the world naively.
Resources:
1.
Bilton, N. (2010, May 12). Price of
Facebook Privacy? Start Clicking. Retrieved November 29,2013, from
http://www.nytimes.com/2010/05/13/technology/personaltech/13bas ics.html?_r=0
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Your ending is quite powerful and well- written. I love the quote in your last paragraph.
回覆刪除Besides, you utilize your citation well. This make your words persuasive.
But there are some flaws i have to point out:
1.Your beginning is formed as the script in oral presentation, which should be avoided in formal writing
2.semantic errors --- paragraph2, line6. It should be " convinent"
I also love your ending! The metaphor is really beautiful and impressive.
回覆刪除In your fifth paragraph, "But it doesn’t mean we allow others to collect them and further reveal our undiscovered side." You need to add "that" between "mean" and "we".
In fourth paragraph lines 8, "one can never certain what would be the next trade between Facebook and advertisements." are you trying to say "no one can be certain....."?