What
kind of online privacy will we have in the future?
As more and more
people recognize the privacy problem, Facebook has already noticed and tried to
find ways to content their customers. However, not only Facebook, but also
Google and other social networks have faced the dilemma between advertisers and
customer’s privacy. According to the statistics, Facebook made more than 84% in
revenue by online advertising (Kelly, 2013.) They are mostly lived by selling
information and advertisements. But it doesn’t mean that the users can’t fight
back. Facebook definitely don’t want to lose their users, and they also
understand that users can stop using it and embrace new websites just in a few
clicks. Also, with the rapid growth of technology, privacy problems will only
become more complex. From the small sensors that can track your location to smart
cars which are not yet common place, the more we attach to the Internet, the
more we expose ourselves to the public. “Privacy is increasingly becoming a feature,” said Brendon Lynch,
Microsoft's chief privacy officer (Kelly, 2013.) In short, the balance between privacy and profits will only become more and more difficult to reach.
However, the
author suggests an idea that “not everyone will want the same levels of privacy”.
Facebook can make user’s privacy optional with higher transparency. According
to the author’s example, “personal data such as location have many potentially positive uses, such
as food recommendations, social apps and dating services.” Balancing
privacy and customized service may become possible when the settings are optional and easy-to-check.
Another way
Facebook can use is the “Do Not Disturb” system, which has been adopted by all
major browsers such as Google and Firefox. This system allows users to choose
whether they accept the websites provide online tracking. Some describe this
system as a nuclear bomb in advertising, (Kelly, 2013) while others consider it
as a good way to protect their privacy.
We might change
our thoughts and tend to put more information on the Internet someday in
exchange for customized servings. However, as long as people feel uncomfortable
about sharing themselves, Facebook should respect and offer more options for
them. Moreover, privacy settings should be more active to the customers. For
example, when a new account is introduced into Facebook, the website should actively
illustrate how Facebook works on their personal data. And Facebook can integrate
private information only if the user agrees to receive personal services.
Source:
Kelly, H. (2013, March 1). Figuring out the future of online
privacy. CNN, Retrieved from
http://edition.cnn.com/2013/02/28/tech/web/online-privacy-policies/. - See more
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Still, your annotation 4 is still a nice work. Citations from scholars also make your article more persuasive. But for your two citation, in paragraph 1 and 2 respectively, I think you should make your citation more clearly. In other words, applying APA form directly will be better. Besides, for your concluding paragraph, I think you can also make it another dependent thesis. " , when a new account is introduced into Facebook, the website should actively illustrate how Facebook works on their personal data. And Facebook can integrate private information only if the user agrees to receive personal services." is another constructive and strong, good thesis.
回覆刪除Your article is well organized and easy to understand. You also point out a concrete and feasible way to solve the privacy problem. As the Internet develops, every user's personal information may be exposed and known by people and it may brings danger. It's a serious problem and needs a solution.
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